52:00 What key detail should be added to strengthen the
student's paraphrasing of this excerpt?
Abel
O Dulichium, Same, and Zacynthus are all visible to
Ithaca.
Read the excerpt from The Odyssey.
My home is on the peaked sea-mark of Ithaca
under Mount Neion's wind-blown robe of leaves,
in sight of other islands-Dulichium,
Same, wooded Zacynthus-Ithaca
being most lofty in that coastal sea,
and northwest, while the rest lie east and south
A rocky isle, but good for a boy's training,
I shall not see on earth a place more dear,
Read a student's paraphrase of the excerpt.
Odysseus's home is Ithaca, a rocky island surrounded
by other islands. Odysseus considers Ithaca a great
place in which to grow up.
O Odysseus holds his home very close to his heart.
O The islands surrounding Ithaca lie to the east and
the south
O Ithaca lies under Mount Neion and to the northwest.
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