Rewrite this excerpt from sidney’s sonnet 16 in your own words.

and, love, i thought that i was full of thee;
but finding not those restless flames in me,
which others said did make their souls to pine,
i thought those babes of some pin's hurt did whine,

Sonnet 16 is a sonnet from Astrophil and Stella, a sonnet cycle which includes 108 sonnets and 11 songs. Sonnet cycles contained linked sonnets that described rise and fall of a love relationship.

In Sonnet 16, Astrophil describes his perception of love before Stella. He was attracted to women before, but never experienced the pain of love, as he never truly loved a woman. He mocked other people who told him that they were suffering, convinced that they were weak.

A paraphrase of this sonnet:

I thought that I was full of love;

But I still haven't experienced the flames of love

That others complained about and suffered from,

I thought that they were weak and sensitive to a small source of pain.

malvolio only loves olivia because he thinks if they get married to olivia he will have a noble title, people to serve him, and fine clothes to wear. also he thinks if they get married he will have many expensive things, and he thinks he will be able to order toby around. malvolio only wants to be noble and boss people around he dose not really love olivia. but viola love for duke orsino is real she really loves orsino.

i think he will fail because he tried to get her to love him and she said oh, you are sick of self-love, malvolio. there is no slander in an allowed fool. so i think she knows what malvolio is trying to do. she knows that he only wants to marry her because he wants to be noble and boss people around so that it why i think she said oh, you are sick of self-love, malvolio. there is no slander in an allowed fool because she new he was selfish.