I need help writing a blog for a school project. this is what I got so far: "Throughout the country, poverty levels are rising day to day. But, Lgbtq youth has a different effect on their lives when it comes to being without shelter, hungry and alone. "It can be very dangerous and harmful to the mental and physical health of a person at a young age to be without somewhere they can call home. Teens might get kicked out of the house because family members don’t want to accept their sexuality or who they are as a person, and they end up living on the streets, sleeping on the concrete ground. Cold, tired and so young to be experiencing something so cruel, only because they wanted to be themselves. Not having shelter is hard. "

can someone help me edit this?