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Which revision fixes the mistake in parallel structure in this sentence? ellie always enjoys performing in plays more than to go to the movies. a. ellie always enjoys to perform in plays more than going to the movies. b. ellie always enjoys to perform more in plays than going to the movies. c. ellie always enjoys to perform in plays more than the movies. d. ellie always enjoys performing in plays more than going to the movies.

Study the graph and then complete the analysis of the data by filling in the missing information.

What if the author had used “looked at” instead? punishment would be deemphasized. punishments would be seen as less harsh. the meaning wouldn't change.