Part D Use the draft you created in part C to analyze the structure of the sentences you used. Identify three sentences you
could revise to make more persuasive and effective. In the chart below, list your original sentence in the left
column and your improved sentence in the right column.

the sun warms our planet, and with the moon, creates the tides. the moon orbits the earth and in turn, the earth orbits the sun. because they appear to be the same size in the sky, the sun, earth and moon work together to create eclipses. when the moon is directly in between the earth and sun

i believe the answer is d : )

the speaker versus the boy.