Read this paragraph. Rewrite it on the next page, adding lively verbs and verbals, concrete nouns and colorful adjectives and adverbs.
At down we followed a channel of the Cook River westward toward Pirimapun. Around us
were grasslands, palms, and sago thickets with lots of egrets, ducks, and geese. We scared them
when we passed. Above we saw fruit bats flying south like someone controlled them. They were
tired. Now they would hide their heads inside their wings and sleep all day.

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explanation:

nobody can deny that cars are the most used means of transport all over the world. however owing a car could have some disadvantages. first of all, having a car on your own allows you to go everywhere without depending on timetables. moreover, you can use it whenever you need it no matter the time or the climate conditions. furthermore, if you have a car, you would not have to wait for nobody to share it when going to somewhere. nevertheless, one major disadvantages of owing a car is the fact that fuel is very expensive nowadays so that not everyone can afford it. in addition, you have to pay insurance to be protected by legal conditions. apart from this, the person who owns a car always has to maintain the car and repair any mechanical problem which could costs a huge amount of money. what is more, if you have to travel long distances, and you do not like driving, one probably would be exhausted and irritated due to driving for a long time. besides, cars cause environmental pollution. to sum up, owing a car means that you have more freedom to travel whenever and wherever people want to, however the car maintenance could be a very expensive issue that can have bad consequences at your economy.

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