Can someone fix this poem to make it better? (This is for my sister lol)

The year is coming to an end, I can’t believe it’s true.
Before we know it, We’ll be moving onto somewhere new.

It seems like only yesterday we entered 5th grade
Think of all the fun we’ve had, and all the progress we’ve made

We studied things like math, reading, and writing
We also learned to do our best and to solve disagreements without arguing.

We played at recess on the monkey bars and slides
We hoped we wouldn’t misbehave and have to sit out on the side.

We’ve grown as learners and as friends but now it’s time to go.
Thanks!

maybey isntead of a yesterday maybey a few mins, maybe say instead of thanks say thanks for being my friend? and yea thats all great job

Explanation:

Its good tho

Explanation:

a. the scene is structured as a dialogue between two characters in their own informal language.

the answer would be: it explains that at least one son must join the church

the expression ''as the tithe of his sons'' indicates how his father intended for at least one of his sons to serve the church. this phrase demonstrates that his father offered him as a last resort since none of his brothers chose to serve the church.

hope this answer you: )!