Read the paragraph.
[1] thomas jefferson was the primary author of the declaration of independence. [2] jefferson began writing in early june of 1776, and he took three weeks to finish the first draft. [3] the delegates of the second continental congress reviewed the document during the last week of june.
which is the best way to revise sentence 2 to improve sentence variety in the paragraph?
in early june 1776, jefferson began writing, and he took three weeks to finish the first draft.
jefferson, who began writing in early june 1776, took three weeks to finish the first draft.
the first draft, which jefferson began writing in early june 1776, took him three weeks.
jefferson took three weeks to finish the first draft, which he began writing in early june 1776.

the answer is A.In early June 1776, Jefferson began writing, and he took three weeks to finish the first draft.

Explanation:

free time is when all my homework and chores have been done for the day and i am "free" to do things that i enjoy doing.

usually i spend time watching television. as my favorite tv shows come on at specific times, i make sure that i finish my homework and chores well before the shows. otherwise i will have to miss them. mostly i manage to watch the shows but sometimes extra homework or chores may cause me to miss a show or two, but it is rare. anyhow if i know that i am definitely not able to catch a show in time, i will just set the video recorder to tape the show sothe evening when the weather is fine, i sometimes go for a stroll around the neighborhood with my friends. this is the time when most the neighbors have come home from work or school. we say hello to those whom we know. they are mostly friendly people and they acknowledge our greetings. once in a while we come upon unfriendly neighbors but we just ignore them and carry on. that i can watch it later.

reasoning from several particular examples to establish a general principle