this is pretty much free points but this is the second chapter rough draft to a book im writing. does anyone have any ideas for me??? and the boy is a mind reader. its not mentioned in this chapter tho

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When we speak of books we love, we so often speak of their characters. It is characters who intrigue, infuriate, surprise; characters who drive the story and get under our skin, sometimes forever.

So what makes for a memorable character? Is it their actions, their failures, or what they teach us? Is it important that we ‘like’ them? Is it simply living inside their lives that imprints on our memory?

the answer is:  

he is voicing feelings shared by all humans regardless of race.

in paul laurence dunbar's poem "we wear the mask," he replicates the words mask and we to emphasize how people in general -not just black americans- hide their true feelings. he suggests the masks cover people's faces and eyes, which are the main parts that display their emotions. he also thinks people's pain conceal behind those masks, so that they cannot see reality and nobody is able to see one another's sorrow.

explanation:

family is anyone that you care for and they equally care for you, family sticks together and everyone loves one another, whether they are blood or not anyone can be family. family composition is the makeup of a family, including the number of members, their ages, and their relationships to each other.