[ PLZ DONT REPORT]THIS IS MY RETURNING POEM *crowd cheers* i kno i kno its been a while but im here so fear not ok seriously here it is this is just prolly just steem from my gf breaking up with me but The urge to kill

The want to feel

Although you made me think it was real

i had good intensions till i came across some knockout pills

ya until my body chills

i wont over dose ill take one or dos

ill only sleep is what i tell myself

yea forever is what i think

but this urge makes me on the brink

of destuction like dmx party up

itll all end in one blink

tell me what you think

plz crituqe

U wrote it

Explanation:

faulty parallelism is a construction in which two or more parts of a sentence are equivalent in meaning but not grammatically similar in form.

the correct version of this faulty parallelism in the sentence is:

the hikers knew that the hike was six miles, that it usually required the entire day, and it would not be wise to start after 10: 00 a.m.

the problem is the last sentence, the first two have a basic subject+verb+object structure.

so, to give a proper balance to the structure, or better said, to give a parallel structure, we must write a basic s+v+o structure in all three sentences:

the hikers knew that the hike was six miles, that it usually required the entire day, and it would not be wise to start after 10: 00 a.m.

what is the context here? we need to know what story you're talking about : )