Which option best revises this paragraph to maintain a formal tone throughout?
O A. Replace sentence 1 with: Hiring Jane for a position in your
restaurant is a wise decision that will prove beneficial to all.
B. Replace sentence 2 with: With her superior organizational skills,
ability to relate to others, and general sense of responsibility, she'll
be totally great
C. Replace sentence 4 with: Furthermore, she was frequently praised
by customers for making a great effort to ensure that a positive
experience was had.
D. Replace sentence 3 with: As her previous employer, I have often
seen her take personal answerability for deciphering quagmires -
even those resulting from the actions of negligent colleagues.
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