Please help having trouble with doing this!! Directions and Analysis
Task 1: The First Draft
"Failure" essays can be some of the best kinds to write, as they are both a way to process an
event and reflect on it, and a way to learn how to cultivate an honest tone in your writing.
Write a three-page personal essay (about 1000 to 1500 words) about a time when you failed
at something but learned a valuable lesson. Write this essay in half-hour time chunks, until
you have a finished "skeleton" of an essay. This skeleton should feel complete but in need of
"fleshing out," or expansion. You may need to spend between one and a half to two hours to
do this.

motivation

the following key ideas correctly express the key sentence.

restate key idea: most people can learn to swim in ten short lessons.

restate key idea: the majority of water-accident victims require mouth-to-mouth breathing.

restate key idea: an empty, tightly closed gallon jug will support a tired swimmer.  

restate key idea: first aid is to prevent accidents as well as assist in rescue.

explanation: the key idea needs to have the same topic as the key sentence (drowning and safety).

the answer to this question

they both lost a woman they loved named lenore

they believed they interracted with a talking raven

they became orphaned at a young age.