Which best explains the difference between a local and a global revision? A. A local revision focuses on the use of language and detail; a global revision addresses broader aspects of the piece.

B. A local revision focuses on main ideas, themes, and main
characters; a global revision mainly deals with word choice.

C. A local revision is made by the writer and can be changed later; a global revision is made by the publisher and cannot change.

D. A local revision is usually made during the brainstorming phase; a
global revision is made after the first draft is finished.

faulty parallelism is a construction in which two or more parts of a sentence are equivalent in meaning but not grammatically similar in form.

the correct version of this faulty parallelism in the sentence is:

the hikers knew that the hike was six miles, that it usually required the entire day, and it would not be wise to start after 10: 00 a.m.

the problem is the last sentence, the first two have a basic subject+verb+object structure.

so, to give a proper balance to the structure, or better said, to give a parallel structure, we must write a basic s+v+o structure in all three sentences:

the hikers knew that the hike was six miles, that it usually required the entire day, and it would not be wise to start after 10: 00 a.m.

the rhetoric device being used to persuade the audience is pathos.

breathe, think and analyze the situation, pull them aside and talk to them about it