The best way to improve a thesis sentence

Well, I can't say for sure since you haven't provided one for me to critique, so

I can't say how to IMPROVE it if I don't know what's wrong with it.

All I CAN do is make a general comment about thesis statements in general, such as this:

Make sure that you have included the topic, your debatable opinion and (though not obligatory) your supporting points. Do not introduce your idea; simply state it directly.

Explanation:

Example:

Public schools should require students to wear uniforms because they reduce distraction, promote unity, and ensure student safety.

is it rising action, falling action, climax, or resolution? need answer also

where is the passage at?