Show, not tell

1. Tell: “it’s snowed hard all through the night.”
Show:

2. Tell: “we spent the day at the beach.”
Show:

3. Tell: “I had fun at summer camp.”
Show:

4. Tell: “Tim was nervous about the history test.”
Show:

Both men foresaw the us as a great future power. however, they differed on the path the nation was to follow in achieving this role. while jefferson preferred an agrarian nation, hamilton favored an industrial and business intensive nation. as such, jefferson detested hamilton's idea of a strong federal government. jefferson wanted the bulk of power to rest with the states. these major views were behind polarizing washington's cabinet into two distinct factions. hamilton's followers became known as federalists and jefferson's democratic-republicans.