2. Copy this passage into your book, editing for punctuation.
Living in butter bay was a green slimy monster slowly swimming in the surf one day was a boy named bruce
and do you know what happened suddenly he was caught by a long rubbery arm which pulled him right under
the water the more bruce tried to get oway the more it hurt seeing him saw him struggling two lifesavers roced
over to him what a relief bruce was saved and whatever monster it was that had been lurking under the sea
was never seen again

Living in butter bay was a green slimy monster. Slowly swimming in the surf one day, was a boy named Bruce, and do you know what happened? Suddenly he is caught by a long rubbery arm that pulled him right under the water. The more Bruce tried to get away the more it hurt seeing him, but two lifesavers who saw him struggling rowed over to him. What relief. Bruce is safe, and whatever monster it is that is lurking under the sea was never seen again.

Explanation:

stating you point whats is aking you to write about?

are you kidding? from that description of two mansions, you can't figure out which one is bleak and desolate? maybe you should consider looking those words up in a dictionary, if you don't know what they mean already.