First read a draft of an essay "two critiques of imperialism." this essay was written in response to an assignment asking the
ter to examine how joseph conrad's heart of darkness and jonathan swift's gulliver's travels use the strengths of their
respective genres to critique imperialism.
barries the second make it clearer and more persuasive. try to make the use of rhetorical devices more effective, the tone more consistent, and the transition more organized.

How can the passage best be revised to eliminate logical fallacies and improve clarity

My dog sleeps beside my bed he wakes me up in the middle of the night to let him out. complete, run-on sentence or comma splice

Aids is growing fastest in the poorest countries of africa. these nations don’t have enough doctors, medical labs, or money for medicine. a recent study showed that only a small percentage of hiv-infected children in africa are getting any medical treatment at all. what central idea is emphasized in both sources? the hiv/aids epidemic in africa is serious. the hiv/aids epidemic in south africa is serious. the hiv/aids epidemic among african children is serious. the hiv/aids epidemic among south african children is serious