You are asked to give a speech to a group of people about social security. the demographic of your audience is 60% 65-80 year olds, 30% 45-64 year olds and 10% 30 — 44 year olds. when writing your speech you should focus on .
a) how to plan and invest for one's financial future
b) how to live off of monthly social security income
c) how the government plans to save the social security system
d) how social security benefits might be reduced 30 years from now

Read the rough draft of a student's conclusion to anargumentative editorial.(1) year-round schooling would student achievement.(2) not so much information would have to be crammed intonine months. (3) furthermore, the elimination of long breaks,particularly summer break, would significantly reduce"learning loss" and the additional time wasted at thebeginning of each academic year to reteach previouslylearned material. (4) it is clear that year-round schooling students learn and retain more. (5) the united staleis not the only country to experiment with a year-roundschool schedule. (6) although many still claim that evidenceabout year-round school and its link to higher achievement isinconclusive, these people need to open their eyes and seethat students in these schools consistently score higher oncertain assessments than students who attend schools withtraditional nine-month calendars. (7) it is about time that wereplaced our outdated and inefficient school calendars.which best revises sentence 6 to create a more appropriate and respectful tone