Which demonstrates the best revision of the sentence?

the soccer coach bought all new uniforms for the team and then he bought all new soccer balls and new nets.

a. the soccer coach bought all new uniforms for the team and he also bought all new soccer balls and nets.
b. the soccer coach bought all new soccer balls, nets, and uniforms for the team.
c. the soccer coach bought all new uniforms for the team, he bought all new soccer balls, and he bought all new nets.
d. leave it as is.

Before ending this lesson, take a moment to review an informative research essay you have written. you’ve probably already written a conclusion to the essay. but is it the best conclusion it can be? does it properly summarize the main subtopics of your essay? does it state in one or two sentences the “so what” of your topic. if your topic was abraham lincoln, your essay shouldn’t be just about abraham lincoln. it should answer, “so what about abraham lincoln? ” take five or ten minutes, and looking only at that single paragraph, revise your conclusion