Which revision would be the best improvement of this sentence from paragraph 2? a) transportation by a raft is a symbolic role in the evolution of local history of transportation. b) the transportation by a raft as a role of traveling is symbolic of the evolution of local history. c) the raft is a fitting symbol of the role that transportation has played in the evolution of local history. eliminate d) the transportation by a symbolic raft, which represents the role of transportation, in the evolution of local history.

I believe if the answer to "Which revision would be the BEST improvement of this sentence from paragraph 2?" can't be "D. The transportation by a symbolic raft, which represents the role of transportation, in the evolution of local history." because it is eliminated so it would be "C. The raft is a fitting symbol of the role that transportation has played in the evolution of local history."

I say that "C" is the answer because it is the one to be more informational and is true.

A. Transportation by a raft is a symbolic role in the evolution of local history of transportation.

B. The transportation by a raft as a role of traveling is symbolic of the evolution of local history.

C. The raft is a fitting symbol of the role that transportation has played in the evolution of local history.

D. The transportation by a symbolic raft, which represents the role of transportation, in the evolution of local history.

to inform the reader that the text will take a second look at the grimms’ original tales

he describes the bird as "stately."

i hope this

~ash belle