What is the main problem with the following critique?

“i’ve never liked horses, so i didn’t think your speech was very interesting. besides, the way your voice sounds has always bugged me

Pls i give ! i will give you 50 points no ! its a essay by the way so pls do it well at the beginning of the story, alicia is convinced that scallops will hurt her. why then does she claim at the end of the story that she was going to have "a good day"?