How can this sentence be corrected for proper punctuation? ?

no because its good to learn more languages because if your going to get a job and if a person does not know english how are you going to do it?

explanation:

try to learn all the languages

i would tell them that you admire their sports skills and you hope to become a talented player like them one day

explanation:

since you're new to the sport you could ask them if they have any pointers to you succeed at the sport. you could even ask them if you could practice together sometime.