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World Languages, 02.12.2020 05:40 teneshiathomas

(The subject is writing) Can you show me any grammar errors in this: Leaning against his cupboard door was Harry himself. Mrs. Dursley was yelling at Harry to come out. Harry had just taken out his clothes to change when he was no longer in is cupboard. He saw Ron standing next to Hermione, who was yelling at Neville. His eyes were very bright and shone like the sun. Harry walked up to his friends while following the other two kids next to him. He said in a low voice “Hey guys. “ Ron smiled and waved at Harry. The one person he didn’t want to see walked up to them. He was sure that Draco was going to insult them again. He looked up at Draco and saw that he was smiling. “Bet you think I’m gonna insult you isn’t that right potter? “ He stared at Draco unsure about what to say. ”Well I’m not going to. “ Harry was relieved. “I actually came to say sorry for being mean to you guys all these years. “ Draco said in a hushed voice. “I hope you guys can forgive me.” Ron walked in front on Harry and started yelling at Draco to shove off. “Why would we forgive a deatheater like you!” Ron crossed his arms and stared at Draco. “Ronald Bilius Weasley! Even if it’s Malfoy you don’t have the right to say that!” Hermione said obviously sticking up for Draco. Ron and Hermione started yelling at each other. Draco grabbed Harry’s arm and pulled him away from them. Draco let go of his arm and smiled. “How ‘bout we call a truce?” Draco stuck his hand out. Harry looked down at his hand and slightly smiled. “Of course.” He grabbed Dracos hand and shook it. They let go of each others hands and smiled. “Well I have to go catch up with Pansy and Blaise, talk to you later!” Draco walked off and Harry watched him.

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