The best way to improve the conclusion is to revise sentence 1 to restate a specific topic. add details about a future goal to sentence 2. delete sentence 3 because it is repetitive. specify the name of the film in sentence 4.

Miguel is making an obstacle course for field day.at the end of every sixth of the course,there is a tire .at the end of every third of the course,there is a hurdle.at witch locations of the course will people need to go through more than one obstacle?

My mothers voice was like a cool dark room in summer peacefull smoothing quite identify the type of figurative language

How do you say my cousins wee gettin along badly during the party