Add adjectives to improve the following passage. the man stopped by the park to pet the dog. then he stepped into the bus. the bus made stops before it pulled up in front of a(n) restaurant. he jumped out and ran up the steps. a while later, he returned with a bag of scraps for the dog.

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The man stopped by the park to pet the black/white dog. Then he stepped into the red/green bus. The bus made many/a few stops before it pulled up in front of a small/busy restaurant. He jumped out and ran up the four/five steps. A while later, he returned with a small/big bag of scraps for the black/white dog.

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No has to have commas in it