Can someone proof read this for me
maria y jones
hola jones, ¿cómo estás?
jones: ¿bien y tú?
maria: bueno, pero hace frío
jones: sí, ¿por qué no sales?
maría: ok, ¿puedes hacerme un favor y escuchar mi música?
jones: ok ven y ponlo abajo escuchar
maria: qué tienen que decir
jones: es muy bueno, ¿puedo tenerlo?
maria: sí

It is supposed to say Bien Y usted? if you sre trying to be formal depending if it is a friend.
also where it says 
Jones: ok ven ponlo abajo eschuchar
it is supposed to say ok ven y ponlo abajo para escuchar
besides that it is good.

As said above, Usted is the formal form of you, which you would use when referring to parents, grandparents, uncles, teachers, and anyone that you would give respect towards. When taking with friends you would use the Tú, which is informal and a more causal (lack of a better word) version.

3. study 4.eat 5.play american football 6.write a card 7.practice piano 8.swim in the pool 9.paint a mural 10.listen to the band 11.dance at a party 12.drink milk 13.visit panama 14.open the card 15.prepare dinner 16.stay in the house 17.watch tv 18.write on the paper 19.study spanish 20.examine the paintings in the museum. i hope this : )

What are our choice for it?