You will revise one body paragraph from your informational article. Then you will write a reflection on the changes you have made. You will submit the original paragraph, the revised paragraph, and the reflection paragraph. View the grading rubric as you complete your assignment. This is your guide to a super submission. Review your informational article. Choose one body paragraph to revise. Copy this paragraph into a new document. Combine two or more sentences in your paragraph for varied syntax. Review your paragraph for any use of passive voice. Revise those sentences. Write a short reflection paragraph on the revision process. Describe the changes you made and how these changes improved your writing. Save and submit: The original draft of your body paragraph The revised draft of the same paragraph The reflection on the changes you have made Save your work to your computer or drive. Submit your work in 02.09 Syntax and Voice. To begin with the oldest video game ever made was tennis for two. William Higinbotham made it so people can have fun entertainment with technology. He invented the game in Brookhaven national laboratory on long island in New York in 1958. There are now over 800 thousand video games of all different genres all because a man decided to create a video game in 1958. For example, back then they could not just turn on their game system and play at home they had to go to where they had tennis for 2 and wait in line to play. It says in Tennis for Two by Wikipedia that the game was exceedingly popular during the three-day exhibition, with players lining up to play the game, especially high school students. Those students where literally excited to play the game.