Michelle dropped out of college on account of having to take a job and go to work to her family. what is the best way to revise the sentence to eliminate wordiness and keep the same meaning? michelle dropped out of college on account of having to go to work to her family. michelle dropped out of college to take a job and go to work to her family. michelle dropped out of college to take a job to her family. michelle took a job to her family.

The best way to revise the sentence to eliminate wordiness and keep the same meaning is C. Michelle dropped out of college to take a job to help her family.

Explanation:

When a sentence includes too many "useless" words, they may clutter writing and hinder comprehension. This excesive use of words is called wordiness, and could be avoided by writing simply and directly what the writer aims to convey.

In this case, sentence C is the best option because it conveys all the elements of the original sentence that carry meaning (Michelle, the fact that she dropped out of college and the fact that she took a job in order to help her family) without using any unnecessary connector, repetition or complex structure.

world war i had a devastating effect on german-americans and their cultural heritage. up until that point   german-americans, as a group, had been spared much of the discrimination, abuse, rejection, collective mistrust experienced by so many different racial and ethnic groups in the history of the united states. indeed, over the years, they had been viewed as a well integrated and esteemed part of american society. all of this change with the outbreak of war.  

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