Which is the best peer evaluation of the conclusion? The details and mechanics are good, but sentences 2 and 3 should be reorganized to include logical transitions. The word choice and style are good, but there are punctuation and organizational errors in sentences 1 and 2. The mechanics and organization are good, but sentences 1 and 3 should be edited to achieve a formal style and objective tone. The tone and style are good, but errors in grammar, spelling, and punctuation in sentences 1, 2, and 3 should be fixed.