Read a sentence from an argumentative essay. Caesar Augustus didn't like war, so he made sure people couldn't fight wars after he died. Which is the best example of how to revise the sentence to include formal language? The Roman guy wanted peace, so he created a treaty to protect Rome. Caesar Augustus created a peace treaty that couldn't be broken after his death. Caesar Augustus brought a peace to the Roman Empire that endured long after his death. The guy Caesar didn't want Rome to be at war after his death, so he created a lasting peace.