Directions: Read the following paragraph and follow the instructions in the last sentence. Some writers' work needs little revision. They are hardly ever redundant. Writing is just a part of their regular routine Others find avoiding redundancy a difficult challenge. This is a true fact. Surely you have no objections about it; correct Or future plans to dispute it? I'll reduce down my references to these obvious examples and continue on. I'm sure you'd like me to get to the point and come to a final conclusion. Identify the seven redundant modifiers in this paragraph to receive the free of personal satisfaction.

they thought they were   chrstian even though they were roman opening a r religous war and giving people hope

saint genesius of rome was an actor, a comedian. according to the legend, he decided to fake his baptism, as in a play, before emperor diocletian. it is said that in the middle of his "baptism" -by a fake priest-, a miracle occurred when water came in contact with him, he really turned into a christian, a real one, and because of this he was tortured and executed. his own relics are allegedly held in the church of several churches in rome, namely: san giovanni della pigna, santa susanna di termini, and st. lawrence.

. most was thought to be found in the nubian desert, which is part of the sahara desert.