Consider a personal essay that begins with the following thesis: I wanted to quit my job and start my own business, but I
wasn't sure if I could make it — this would be a life-
changing decision.
Which paragraph below would not fit into the body of this essay?
A. A paragraph describing my business idea
B. A paragraph detailing the stock performance of my current
company
C. A paragraph expressing my fears of starting a new business on
my own
D. A paragraph about the reasons I wanted to quit my job