What is wrong with this paragraph? When a puddle dries on the sidewalk, the water disappears completely. This is because the air after a storm creates an energy that makes the water disappear. Water will only be created again by the sky during the next storm.

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Explanation:

Water is not created, it is transferred into another stage.

The correct way to write this paragraph would be:

When a puddle dries on the sidewalk, the water disappears completely. This is because the air after a storm creates an energy that makes the water disappear. Water will only fall once the water cycle has completed.

Or something like that. Hope it helped!

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explanation:

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