Before
my mother was very strict when it came to our schoolwork. she would come home and make us sit down and do our homework.

after
“all right girls, hurry up with that homework—it’s bedtime,” mom would say. i was the one who always took the longest to finish my work.

rewriting the passage is an example of which part of the drafting process?

adding dialogue
creating a plot
creating unity
exploding the moment

Why was "impressment" an important issue during the jefferson administration? the united states was being treated disrespectfully, as the spanish navy was forcing american sailors into naval service for them. the united states was being treated disrespectfully, as the french navy was forcing american sailors into naval service for them. the united states was treating british navy with disrespect by forcing british sailors into naval service for them. the united states was being treated with disrespect on the high seas, as the british navy was forcing american sailors off their ships and into naval service for them. the united states was treating french navy with disrespect by forcing french sailors into naval service for them.