[1] snowshoe cats have a unique origin. [2] these delightful cats came
into existence because of a mistake. [3] a woman breeding siamese cats
noticed that some of her kittens were born with white paws. [4] this is not
an acceptable trait of siamese cats. [5] the woman decided she liked the
kittens. [6] she kept them, mixed them with american shorthaired cats,
and developed the snowshoe. [7] snowshoe cats are intelligent, lovable,
and have four white paws.
what is the best way to improve the sentence fluency in the paragraph?
a) combine sentences 2 and 3.
b) make the tone consistent.
c) vary the beginnings of the sentences.
d) add transition words to some sentences.