Who wants to zoom with me

J’ai besoin d’écrire une histoire, avec une allumette.

Could someone who speaks french look over some text i wrote to see if it is correct? my meal: je vais manger les 4 morceaux de poulet mccroquettes et le biscuit de l'omrm aux morceaux de chocolat. je vais boire l'eau dasani. le repas contient 330 calories.my friends meal: mon amie va manger le wrap-éclair au poulet grillé avec sauce chipotle et le biscuit de l'omrm aux morceaux de chocolat. ils vont boire le jus d'orange minute maid. le repas contient 570 calories.i am ordering items from mcdonalds and stating how many calories are in each meal.

In this french correct ? i dont know if the person i am talking to is a female or male im assuming that wouldn't affect it but i kind of forget . i know all adjectives agree with the nouns that they modify. métier is masculine so i use the adjective bon and bon is masculine so i use un? is that how it works je pense un bon métier pour toi est un artiste ou un architecte. i think a good job for you is an artist or an architect