Rewrite this sentence from the lesson as two or three sentences so that it is clearer to the reader. keep the ideas, but you may change the wording and sentence structure as needed. if the weather ever warms up so that we can swim, and if we can find new suits that we like and that we can afford, then we will know what we will be doing with the time that we have free from school because we need to do things together that we enjoy in order to remain the good friends that we are.

the illustration   that would give a reader a clear understanding of the text is a picture of men constructing the frame of a building.the frame is made of iron bars. the text describes the job of blacksmiths'. these were very organised and they had different names: "the driver" and "the heater". the text describes the way in which these men worked ; they worked iron pieces as if they were playing a sport. in fact, the text wants to show the men's skills. the text also puts some emphasis on the use of '' rivets'' in construction. this kind of nails were not always used in the construction of manhattan.

some examples:

"and with an underhand toss he hurled the smoking rivet straight at the catcher, who caught it in mid-air in his catching can." men's skills

"when the driver was ready for a new " the emphasis on the rivet ( special nail used in construction).

" it against a beam to remove any cinders, and jammed it into the waiting hole. " the emphasis on the rivet.

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