What is the best way to revise this sentence so that it conveys clear, concise ideas and does not change the meaning of the sentence?

Make sure the commas are placed where commas should be placed and the periods are placed where periods should be placed. Too many commas can get confusing and too many periods could mean too many pauses. Find the balance between the two.

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sorry i was debating over answering this question or not, but i do believe it is a sin to be gay. in the beginning, god created man and he created women to be a for man. there are many "political" views on this topic but i believe the bible is right. in the kjv bible, leviticus 18: 22, god talks about how it it is an abomination for women to be with women and man to be with man. god knows that everybody is a sinner, and he gives everyone a chance to repent. i'm not forcing god's word on anybody, but i do believe it is a sin. no matter the sin, as long as you repent, god is willing to forgive, you just have to accept him as your lord and savior.