Read the conclusion to a personal statement. (1) i’ve had some growth experiences. (2) they’ve me to improve my math skills. (3) moreover, i have learned to apply these skills to designing and constructing movie sets. (4) i’m looking forward to honing my skills by working as a production assistant on a film this summer. the best way to improve the conclusion is to revise sentence 1 to restate a specific topic. add details about a future goal to sentence 2. delete sentence 3 because it is repetitive. specify the name of the film in sentence 4.