Read the following paragraph. i believe that the “read books, share the love” advertisement effectively uses the association technique to convince people to read more books. the advertisement targets parents who perhaps could easily associate the children in the picture with their own children. in the ad, a mother and father are reading a book to their two young children. it seems that this has a positive connotation of intimacy and love. maybe the image implies that reading is not just intellectually beneficial, but that it creates a closer bond between parents and their children. because of this association technique, parents are persuaded to read to their children. most parents certainly would want their children to do well academically and feel loved at the same time. therefore, this ad effectively encourages literacy. which of the following revisions would most likely improve this paragraph?

The revision that would most likely improve this paragraph is:

* the elimination of passive language

Explanation:

The question is not complete since it does not provide the options to answer it, here are the options:

* a better explanation of the target audience

* the elimination of passive language

* more specific details from the ad

* a comprehensive topic sentence

This paragraph seems to have the objective of giving a direct and clear opinion and approvement of the ad the author is analyzing, the best way to accomplish this goal is to use active sentences to convey the message simply instead of using the passive voice which because of its grammatical structure will make the information harder to understand.

after the signature of the treaty of versailles in june 1919, germany lost nearly 25,000 square miles and a population of 7 million people. these territories included eupen-malmedy area and moresnet which were ceded to belgium. regarding relations with france, germany ceded the sovereignty of the saar coal mines to this country, as well as the provinces of alsace-lorraine.

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