While the wind blew leaves off the trees, rain fell and thunder sounded. clark decided to rewrite the sentence as follows: while the gusting wind ripped leaves off the trees, rain poured and thunder clapped. read this sentence from a paragraph clark wrote describing a thunderstorm. was clark correct in making this revision? a) yes, because the new sentence adds vivid language b) yes, because the new sentence is longer than the first sentence c) no, because the new sentence may be too long for some of the readers d) no, because the new sentence uses words that readers may not understand

sorry, i just really need points. and to this question, maybe i know the answer. but i have no time now. d

at nineteen years old, nicole c. kear's biggest concern is choosing a major--until she walks into a doctor's office in midtown manhattan and gets a life-changing diagnosis. she is going blind, courtesy of an eye disease called retinitis pigmentosa, and has only a decade or so before lights out. instead of making preparations as the doctor suggests, kear decides to carpe diem and make the most of the vision she has left. she joins circus school, tears through boyfriends, travels the world, and through all these hi-jinks, she keeps her vision loss a secret.

when kear becomes a mother, just a few years shy of her vision's expiration date, she amends her carpe diem strategy, giving up recklessness in order to relish every moment with her kids. her secret, though, is harder to surrender - and as her vision deteriorates, harder to keep hidden. as her world grows blurred, one thing becomes clear: no matter how hard she fights, she won't win the battle against blindness. but if she comes clean with her secret, and comes to terms with the loss, she can still win her happy ending

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