English, 29.01.2020 04:11 uwrongboi

30 points! !

so i have to write a short story, and i have serious writer's xd
here are my prompts:
-it is a dark fall night, and the power in your house has just gone
-you and your friends are on a camping trip in the middle of the

it has to be a suspense short story- so tell me which one you think would make a better story, and if you could maybe make some points towards a possible conflict, an unexpected conclusion, and things to make it more suspenseful that would be really !
no bad answers just so you can get the points.. : d

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Callahan was huddled in a cavern near the Pacific Ocean when the Feds closed in. There were still shreds of human flesh under his fingernails when the serial killer surrendered to the inevitable capture. They could put him behind bars, he vowed as they dragged him down the narrow path toward the waiting cars, but he would escape. And then they'd be sorry. He lashed out at the nearest officer, landing a crippling blow on his kneecap. The remaining men knocked him to the ground and bound him foot and hand to ensure his cooperation.

He was sentenced to a lonely prison for the criminally insane; his only companions the wardens and fellow madmen. Over the next seventeen years, Callahan spent every spare second planning his escape. He studied every weakness in the prison system. He knew every guards movements. He spent several years contriving to get a ground-floor cell so he could dig his way out. That plan nearly succeeded, until he reached bedrock a few feet below the cell floor. With every failed plan, his anger grew. He would escape this wretched cell if it killed him.

Answer from: lukecoupland4401

I think you should use "You and your friends are on a camping trip in the middle of the woods..."

* You and you're friends suddenly wake to a scream in the night
* You and you're friends are on a dangerous but adventurous mission to track down a ring of international thieves
* You and you're friends are supposed to be on a calm camping trip, only to find yourselves surrounded by a group of robbers

(Don't know if these were any help, but I just chose the topics that might make a camping trip story pretty suspenseful, if you can put it as a mystery or something to that affect)

Answer from: Quest

this doesnt make any sense imao

Answer from: Quest

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