Hurry ! tris imboden has drummed for stevie wonder and julio iglesias however, most know him as the drummer in the band chicago. what is wrong with the sentence? its not***it has an incorrect conjunctive adverb.***

The sentence is not grammatically correct as for it is a run on sentence with a "comma splice". To be fixed the sentence should be separated into 2 sentences with a period in between or a semicolon should precede the conjunctive adverb.

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