Finish the last paragraph and a half of this 9/11 first person narrative for me. it was a sunny tuesday morning. i was a bit tired from the new york giants versus denver broncos game that ran on pretty late the night before. nonetheless i woke up early as i always did, threw on my lucky brown suit with my matching brown tie and hopped on the train. the train ride, per usual, was extremely boring. as i hopped off the train and took a deep breathe of that new york city air i smiled. as it was a huge day for me. the firm was taking pitches all day for new ideas to make the company boom again as our stocks weren’t doing too well. so with money, aspiration, and hope clouding my mind, i walked through the streets of the big apple with a smile on my face just knowing today would be a big day. at the door of the firm, i opened the door for a young lady that couldn’t be older than 23 or 24 years old. she had an strong aroma from expensive perfume that someone down the street could smell. she too had the same aspiration i had in becoming the savior of the company with her possibly great pitch towards the board. as i walked into my area waiting for pitches to be announced i dapped up my good pal, jason, a japanese worker here who’s been with the company for 13 years. i hoped the best for him, as he has not gotten a second look from the higher ups since he somehow managed to get a job here. i checked my montblanc watch every two seconds because i was incredibly impatient. i checked my watch one last time. 8: 45. i straightened my tie and then a large boom a few blocks away caused the way i looked at life to change forever. as i looked out the window i saw people rushing down the street screaming. what could possibly be so bad? i ran out the building along with all of my coworkers who were just as curious as myself. as i turned left, the exact opposite direction everyone was running, i was instantly shaken up. the south tower was on fire! at first i thought that there was an explosion somehow but after further questioning a man said that a plane had flew into the tower. astounded, i stared as the south tower burned. a thick, dark cloud of smoke started to flood the sky. it truly was a scene straight out of the movies. and what followed afterwards was truly horrific. a second plane hit the north tower! as people ran and debris fell i had to run with them. so many things were running through my mind.

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Will anyone be able to check for grammatical errors and give an opinion on the essay itself? write about the following topic: some people believe that allowing children to make their own cholces on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. discuss both these views and give your own opinion. —— nowadays, in this busy and fast developing world teaching children from an early age to cope with their own decisions (such as food, clothes etc.) and then take the coincidences after that is something that a lot of people believe that it is important for them. on the other hand other people think that it might end up in a society of humans who put their wishes before anyone else's. but which one of these views will predominate? firstly, the people who allow their children to make their own decisions are the people who everyone should look up to. it is important to let your children learn from the mistakes their make. the parents can not be with them all the time every day and for that reason, teaching them to deal with their decisons or even problems will them in the future. of course, there are always disadvantages such as some people may really forget about that their children will need them at a certain point in life and may loose connection whit them. but that is why it should have that moderately path, where kids will make their own decisions but will feel comfortable to always ask for a advice tueur parents. on the other hand, there are and the second type of parents which think that too much individualism is not good. it really depends on the parents how they will teach their children to carry on with the independence they have. a lot of them might forget that they are still kids and will need and advices from time to time and because of that the parents turn their kids in individuals who only think about their own wishes due to the fact that they are let on their own and have to cope with everyone and everything by themselves. in conclusion, i think that the best decision someone can make is to look up to the first type of parents. that way they will be able to train their children to become independent people who will respect the wishes of others and they will be able to cope with their decisions in the future when they need it.

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