What kinds of problems should be corrected in the following paragraph during local revision? Seven twenty-five in the morning is early, and many students have trouble with how early school starts? The students who go to my school and have to be hear this early would all tell you that they never get enuogh sleep. If 7:25 is bit a early, however, students just need to go to bed earlier;

Robert was not waiting for her in the little parlor. he was nowhere at hand. the house was empty. but he had scrawled on a piece of paper that lay in the lamplight: "i love you. good-by—because i love you." what significant idea, presented throughout the novel, does robert's final departure and note highlight? edna is ultimately alone in her rebirth. edna needs to find solace in her children. edna will never be truly loved by anyone. edna should not have forsaken her family.