Analyze the given paragraph, and write, in the table below, your comments pertaining to its problems with the following elements, and also include your suggestions for finding solutions to these problems. unity and coherence
transitions to link sentences to one another
topic sentence
supportive evidence
The Paragraph
Throughout history both Africans and African-Americans have faced oppression and discrimination. Hughes emphasizes the events of the past and the present. Ancient Egypt is contrasted with modern America—the pyramids and the Woolworth Building. The extreme violence of racism is described in the atrocities committed in the Belgian Congo and in Hughes’ time with a lynching in Texas. So, individuals have suffered across time.

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Read the excerpt from "home front diary." jimmy simmons stopped by today to tell me that he had enlisted in the army. he asked me if i would write to him, and i said i would. i told him that i've been writing to my uncle arthur and susan's cousin john for about a year, and as an experienced correspondent i had some advice about all the censorship. "don't write down any information about your location or the number of soldiers in your unit because the censors will cut all of that away," i said. "in my experience, loose lips not only sink ships, they make letters look like snowflake decorations! ” well, he belly laughed over that one. how is the author's perspective different from jimmy's? the author has been to war and she can give jimmy advice. jimmy has become a soldier and does not believe the author’s advice. the author has experience writing to soldiers but jimmy does not. jimmy has more experience at letter writing than the author.

Which best explains how this excerpt creates suspense it develops the plot using dialogue instead of description. it explains that the fishermen have found two graves on the island. it shows that manjiro is a character who asks a lot of questions. it includes a question that the reader will want to know the answer to.