Is the following question punctuated correctly? What makes me nervous, is that I entered the numbers of 2 of my Credit Cards that were not accepted, however, my VISA debit card number was accepted.

If not please rewrite it with the correct punctuation.

* Remove the comma after 'nervous.'

* Replace the comma after 'accepted' with a semicolon.

BTW You should know that...

* The number 2 should be written as 'two.'

* The words 'Credit Cards' should NOT be capitalized.

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terrestrial level - terrene position

potentially - possible/likely

dangerous tasks - treacherous assignment

specifically - exactly/precisely

disabilities - impairment/ailment

to boost - push/lift/raise

artificial intelligence - robot/ ai/machine

enemies - terrorist/opponent/competitor

scientific endeavors - experimental intent

valuable - expensive/priceless

result - outcome/product

hope this !

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