Which revision would most improve the body paragraph?
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O providing clear connections between the thesis and
Chisholm's syntax structure
adding more transitions to describe how the ideas in
the paragraph are related
using a clear topic sentence to connect the thesis of
the essay to its purpose
O including several more quotations that highlight the
positivity in the speech

answer: the four parts of the "australian ballot" 1. the ballot paper is printed at public expense. 2. the ballot paper lists all candidates by position, as well as any other propositions. 3. ballot papers are distributed only at the polling place. 4. ballot papers are filled out by the voter in private. (secret ballot).

the guest is my guess

the excerpt from chapter 2 of "animal farm", by george orwell that is an example of foreshadowing is "these three (snowball, napoleon, and squealer) had elaborated old major's teachings into a complete system of thought to which they gave the name of animalism." animal farm is an allegory of how czarist russia developed into communist russia with all its corruption. old major's teachings represent marx's theories turned into communism, animalism, by the three pigs. this foreshadows the oppression and corruption that will follow this revolt.

where is the sentence at?