Feedback on poem Loneliness is like being lost in a maze.
You don't know how to escape.
Loneliness is two ships passing at night.
They see one another but don't talk.
Loneliness is like the arctic sea.
Cold and no land insight
Loneliness is an abandoned ship.
Your the ship just sitting there in the sea
Loneliness is like a shadow.
That follows you everywhere you go.
Loneliness is like a prison with no walls.
you have freedom, but you have no one to talk to
Loneliness is like space.
A void with only darkness.
Loneliness is like a dark cloud.
Always raining never leaves you alone.
Loneliness.

this poem is really good!!!

Explanation:

the different ways you described loneliness is very creative! 10/10

a complex sentence consists of an independent clause and one or more dependent clauses.  

to write complex sentences, we must use subordinating conjunctions.  

all the complex sentences begin with a subordinating conjunction and when it occurs, a comma must be place at the end of the dependent clause. on the contrary, if the sentence begins with an independent clause, then no comma is used.

after  

although  

as  

because  

before  

if  

since  

when  

for example,  

after she won the competition, she became very popular.  

although my father was hurt, he continued fighting for his rights.  

as all of you got a ten, you will be able to leave early today.  

before he went to the war, he asked his parents to bless him.  

if it is cold, i won’t go out.  

since you didn’t bring the homework, you will get low grades.  

when it is hot in the town, everyone goes to the beach.