I NEED HELP. i dont know how to write my conclusion for my paragraph, and can yall revise and edit it for me?? Everyone has a competitive spirit inside them. That spirit motivates us to achieve our goals, but it is not necessary for success in life. Competition can set us back instead of moving us forward, which is why competition is

For someone to be successful, it's more about how exposed you are instead of how well you compete against others. For example, Starbucks is one of the most popular coffee chains because of how much clout and reviews they get on the internet. When someone sees good reviews about something, that person puts their trust in those individuals and they get into the mindset that the product is great and they go out to get it.

Competition can be destructive to children's self-esteem, it interferes with learning, sabotages relationships, and isn't necessary to have a good time. In a competitive culture, a child is told that it isn’t enough to be good, but that they must triumph over others. Success is normally defined as a victory, even though these are two very different things. Even when the child manages to win, the whole affair, psychologically speaking, becomes a vicious circle: The more he competes, the more he needs to compete to feel good about himself.

Read the excerpts from part 3 of "an occurrence at owl creek bridge." a rising sheet of water curved over him, fell down upon him, blinded him, strangled him! the cannon had taken a hand in the game. as he shook his head free from the commotion of the smitten water he heard the deflected shot humming through the air ahead, and in an instant it was cracking and smashing the branches in the forest beyond. *** a whiz and rattle of grapeshot among the branches high above his head roused him from his dream. the baffled cannoneer had fired him a random farewell. he sprang to his feet, rushed up the sloping bank, and plunged into the forest. *** as he is about to clasp her he feels a stunning blow upon the back of the neck; a blinding white light blazes all about him with a sound like the shock of a cannon—then all is darkness and silence! what function does the motif of the cannon serve throughout the story? the cannon continually pushes farquhar to continue his journey through his dream and back to reality. the cannon encourages farquhar to investigate whether his escape was a dream or reality. the cannon reminds farquhar that time is subjective and encourages him to move quickly in order to reach his home. the cannon represents farquhar’s romantic dream that he escaped his execution and will return home.